Talk:Ghost vlogs001/@comment-36110561-20200623182719

Review  :

After watching security camera footage #3 while looking back on this page, the "slenderman" (who's outfit mostly consists of a blanket covering your actor's head, and an amazon suit of some sorts.) infact, does not appear in security camera footage #3, just a small error i think you should fix.

Speaking of security camera footage, you seem to not use a security camera when filming the "alleged security camera" footage.

Bad grammar and poor punctuation is really common on this article.

When "slenderman" appears, he does not distort the camera but instead add a InstaColor effect on the screen.

And as stated below in the comments, you copied "VisitorsLake".

Now i have no expirience in filming but i think i have the right to give your series a 3 / 10, i just don't wanna be destroy your confidence, work harder, please.